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1. ڽ Ұּ.


 * ̸: ִٿ
 * : 7.0+ ǥ
 * Ⱓ: 2016.09.23 - 2016.10.07 (2)
 * IELTSΰ: 
2 ׽ ̿ 6.5 ޾Ƽ ijٷ ؼ ٴϴٰ 
θ ϸ鼭 ٸ б Խû ϴµ Ǿ 
(ٽ ޾ƿ б) ٽ غϷ Ծϴ. 

 
2. ֱٿ IELTS迡 ۼּ.
 * :
 * : Academic (  O  ), General (   )  <---üũּ.
 * : Listening( 7.5   ), Speaking( 7.0  ), Reading( 7.0  ), Writing( 6.0  )

 
3. ġ Ұ ּ.

̶ ķմϴ!! 

߾Ҵ Gender° ڱϰ ȭǵ ٳ ϴٰ ̿ϼ ϰ 
ŷ 1 20 ̾µ Ʈ3 ũ ϳ .. ߴٰ ϸ鼭 2ָ  
Ȥó ? Ȥ нҼ ? ȵư Ȥ! ϸ ̸ Ȯߴµ 
7.0̶ ٸ ϰ ٽ  Ȯ߾׿.. () 
޾Ƽ ʹ մϴ.. 

4. IELTS  ߴ, ι(Ͽ) Ӱ ּ.

 * Reading:

ɾ а Ǯ ̶ õ帮  
ٸ غð ǪžѴٰ ˷帮;.

п ʹ 躸Ⱑ Ⱦ ұ ϴٰ Ǯþ.
׳ ð Ǯ ߴµ 50и Ǯ 4ΰ ƲȾŵ. ׷ ڴ ; п Դµ
Ǯ Ǯ 󱸿.. 20 ߹ݿ Ҷ 40 а 17ۿ ־..

е ϸ Ҽ ٰ 𸣰ڴٰ ϼ̾µ ׷ 𿣰 ִ°̴ϴ! 
˰ ذϼžؿ. 
T/F/NG ϰ Y/N/NG ߸ Ҿµ ⼭ Ź ʹ ؼ .
׽ ˷ֽô Ǫ  ϰ ߸ ϸ鼭 ð ° .

 ϰ ٳ  'A ʴ´' ԰  'A ٳ Ѵ ' ϶ 
翬  ϸ ٳ Ʈ! ߴµ ʴ´ ݴ ٳ Ѵٰ ƴ Ѵ ΰ.
̰ Ƹ Ű ̰ 翬Ѱ ƴϾ? Ͻôºе ٵ ̰ſ
⿡ 丶 Դٸ ϸ 丶䳪 ٳ ϰ ϸ鼭 丶並 ã ޸鼭 ð Ʈ ް.. ᱹ ãƳ д° ȸ¾ҴŰƿ. 

Ű带 ãƼ ãƳ Ű Ͻô е ŵ ׷ ϸ Ű常 Ǯ 
뵵 𸣰ڰ Ű尡 ãٺ 󱸿.. 
׷ ׽ܲ ȴµ а Ǫ° ߵȴٸ ׷ ϶ ϼ̾. 
׷ ̰ ϴ ˰ Ҽְ ߾ Ǯ־.
׷ ù° ֿ 5.5 - 6.0 ӹٰ ι°ֺ ϰ Ǯ ٽ 󱸿.
û Ѱ ƴ϶ ˷帮⺸ ϸ ٸ Ẹ ڴٰ ˷帮;! 
Ƽžϰ Ȥ ٸ ´ Ǫ Ƽžؿ! 


 * Listening:

° ߿ؿ. ܱ󸶵 ° ߿ѰŰƿ.
̿ ̵峪 ܱ ȭų 꿡 TED talk . ̰ ° ٸ °Űƿ.
⼭ üũ صνð  ̳ ǰ簡 ðͰ~ ˰ ø Ͻǰű.
ٵ Ʋȴ 3 Ծ . 
дٺ ְ~ ִ󱸿. ׷ ڸ 3 ִ Ȯϰ 1 Ȯ ð ٶ 3 ° ΰ ߿ ö °Ϳ 丸 ΰ Ѿ. 
׸ ߿ 鼭 ´ ΰ ־... 
鼭 ° ȵǾ ̷ ׳ ϰ ߸鼭 Ǯϴ.. Ȥ Ⱑ е ѹ ׷~ ϸ鼭 Ǫ° õغô°͵ .. 
׷ Ű ȸ´ ΰŰ׿ ... 鼭 ãڴٴ ϴ¼ ġ ϰ ׳ ٺ ߿ ̰ſ~ ϸ鼭 . ̷ ߾ ó ̿ 7.5̾ ݵ ̷ ؼ 7.5ε Ͻô е ϼż ijġ ž ҰŰƿ..Ф 
׸ 1 溸ðų ø ȵDZ! ű⼭ ϳ ´°ų 3 ϳ ´°Ŷ ī Ȱ ϴ 3, 4 ô Ͻø 1, 2 °ڴٴ Ͻô° Űƿ. 

 * Writing:

2 а ̼ Ʈ б conditional offer ް Ⱓȿ ¾ ߾ 
2޾ȿ overall 6.5 each 6.0 ߾ ߾µ ū ̾. 
غ ׶ ɾ θ ϰ ϸ鼭 
ϳ ɷ δ޹ݸ 8 þ׿.. (׽ 鼭..)

׶ ⵵ ߾ ɵ  Ե ˷ֽô µ غ
̿ ´ ϴ ° ƴϰ  뿡 ؼ ᳾ ִ° ݾƿ. 
̱ 뿹 ε ൿ̾ٴ Ͻø ׷ ö°ſ.. 
ڳ ʴ´ٴ°. ̿ âǼ̳ 󸶳 ִ ƴϰ 
󸶳 , ٰ  ª ȿ Ҿ⸸ Ἥִ ڴٴ°ſ. (ٽ ѹ ̰ Դϴ..)

ijٿ бٴϸ鼭 ̰ ڹ ڳ Ʒ 15cm ¥ 3000 ̻ ߾ 
ô , ׶ ڳ Ƹ ٿٿ 簡鼭  ָ µ 
̿ 250 ȿ ȸ, ȯ湮, ~ ذϷ žؿ. ()
׽ܰ ̾Ƚ ֽ  ū ʿ ʹ ٴ°ſŵ

׸ ū Ǿ ̾Ƚ ֽŰ  ͵  fixed idea ø װ ؼ ٸ ø ־ ϰ 
ª ª ðȿ ؼ Ϸ ̸ ξ Ѵٴ ̾ŵ. 
̾Ƚ ø ū Ǿ ̰ ٷ Task 2 Body1 body2 ٰ µ
6.0 ־ ƴұ ;.. ͼ ϰ ߿ ϰ ȭǰٿͼ 
ƹų ϴµ ̾Ƚ Ҹ 鸮µϸ鼭 Ȧ ÷ ܿ ٰ ԰ŵ.(ٽ ؿ..)

ȸ ϴ°ͺ Structure صΰ  
̵ϰ ð ϱ  ÿ ϽǼſ.
ó ᳻° Ǽ ̷þ ð  Ǵ´ Ҹ ϼ!  ⺻̱!
õ ϱ ª ܾ ° ƴϰ پ ܾ 鼭 Ҹ ϱ淡
Ͽ ʿ Ⱦ ؼ ٵ 5 ϰ 1./ 2.ٰ / 3. / 4.ü / 5. ϴ 常 صΰ ܿ.

̾Ƚ ߴٸ ޾Ƽ ̾Ƚ ɼ ʾҳ
̹ ̿ ⼭ °ɷ ҰԿ..

 * Speaking:

Ͻ ŷ Ǿ. μ ϴ ̶ Ʈ 3 µ  ϸ ڿ~
Ͻ ּż ƴŰƿ. Ҽִ ּ̰ ϰִ Ҽְ ذŰƿ.

ŷ ð ´ س° ߿Ѱ ƴϰ ڱ ǻǥϰ Ҽִ Ŀ Ѱ °Űƿ.

( Public space Ѱſµ ֺ Ұ ִİ ؼ 𸣰ڴٸ鼭 ȭǾ⸦ ߴ 
ũ غ׷ б ؼ ߾.. Ժ ̰ Ŀ ҿ Ҽִ° İ  
´ о⸦ ϸ鼭 л  б Ϲε ̿Ҽִ° ~ ϴٰ ΰ
̾ѵ ҵ鿡 ؼ  𸣰ڴٰ ֺ public space غ  𸣰ڴٰ ̾ϴٰ ߴ ׷~ ϰ Ѱܼ Ʈ 1 2, 3 ߱ ;µ ͼ ׿. )

翬 سð ׷ Ҹ ؾ Ѵٴ°ſ 𸣸 𸣰ڴ, غ ʾҴ, ׷ ̷ ̷ ɼ ? ϴ ϴ°Ű.. װɷ ų ʴ°Űƿ.. ׳ Ѹ 𸣰ڴ ̾~ ϸ ȵDZ ׷ ž ҰŰ 𸥴ٰ Ѱ ٸ ϽǼž ϴ ƴµ Űٰ 𸣰ڴٰ ô° Űƿ! ü 𸣴 о϶! ô°ź ϰ غô°͵....? 

ŷ Ҷ ̱ 뼱 ? ĺ ϴ°ſ ܾ Ծ. 
ѱ ϴ 鵵 μ ϴ ϰ Խ ϴ ݾƿ.
ĺ ϰ ⸦ Ͻñ淡 ϸ鼭 ߽ϴ.
english speaker ߿ ϴ ؼ ̳ ܾ غø ɰŰƿ. 
̵ ص dzϽø ܿð Ͻôµ δ ڿô ϰڴٰ Ⱦô ǥ̳ ܿñ⺸ 
ʿ Ҷ  ڿ Ͻô° DZ ;.
Ʈ3 Ҷ There are lots of views on this idea that ~ but in my opinion ~ ̷ ˰ νø ϴ° DZմϴ. ( п )
(ġ Ұ ͼ Ȳ..)

˼ϰԵ ι ޾ƾҰŰ Ÿ .. Ѹ ǥϸ ó ̸԰ ϴٰ Ǽϰ ׷ ð ϴ ڽ ø ɰŰƿ.. 
ڽŰ ؼ ʿѰ ´°Ű ̹ ŷ ҼŰ ƽ⸸ ϳ׿..


5. edm̿ Ե鲲 ϰ ̾߱⸦ ּ.

-׽!

2ó ׷ ãư dz ÷ش޶ϰ ؼ صȴµ ֽð ֽð Ǽ 峭ó ̰ Ҹ~~~!!! Ͻø鼭 ũ ׾ֽð  ƴ ֽð Ǯּż ؿ. ! ̳ 鵵 ʹ 帮 Ű ּż մϴ. 
( ÷ϴٽôٰ ... Ͻô ǥ ޿ Ϳ.) ÷踶 ۾ ˷ֽð ̰͸ ֽô 
ȵǴ µ ̵ȰŰƿ. ׸ Ƿηθ ŰŰٴ ؿ  մϴ!

-̾Ƚ!

ٷ⺸ Ἥ ֽô ū Ǿ Ǿ ƽ⸸ ϰ
2ֵ Űƿ. 帮 ãư °͵ ߰ ڷ ֽô͵ ʹʹ ! ̿ ̾Ƚ ֽó׿!! Ź ϰ Ͻ ˷ּż ϰ ÷ ܿɷ ġ ø µ ٵ ϳ 6.0ް հؼ ߽ϴ. ؿ!

-!

I always felt sorry for asking too much after class.. 
Thanks a lot for your help and useful tips. 
and also I really surprised by that you remember every student and their speaking styles and problems.
That helped me to figure out what my problems are and get 7.0 in speaking even though I made some huge mistakes during the test. Thanks again!


-˷!

̿ ϸ鼭 ó ϴ Ʈм̳ ּż ϸ ~ ϸ鼭 ϰ Ǯ־ ʹ ұ 
 Ʈ ͼ ġ ̾Ƴ ᳾ְ ּż մϴ!
 
6. edm̿ п ּ.

е Ͻ ÿ ̾Ƚܰ ׽ 
ֽô ÷   ū Ǿٰ մϴ. 
Ÿ п ٸ  ÷ ƴ ܾ, ־̴ 븸 ʴ! 
ü 帧 ̿ л ϴ° , ϴ° 
̿ ˰־ ϴ° ֽô°Űƿ.

̶ ϴ ϱ⵵ ϰ 2 ̿
躸鼭 Ʈ ޾Ұ ߴ £  Ǿµ
ϴ п ϱ ħ п 賯 Ͽ ϰ Ծ 
Ե 躻 1 ҿ ڽǷ ̴ ū ̾. 
״п ׳ Ǯ ġ ʾ մϴ. 

ٽ !!
 
7. IELTS յ ģ鿡 Ǵ ּ.

е ̿ غϰ ŵ ϴ ż հϽñ ٶԿ!

Ư ؼ Ʈ غؾϴ Ʈ ôºе!
̼ غ߾  ƴµ Ʈ ؼ ̻̿ ̿ ͼ ݾƿФ
ΰ ϴ° ̿ θ Ѱ ܱ бٴϰ ϴµ ū ǰŵ. 

ٸ а̽ е鵵 ̿ ʹٴ ؾ ̸ Ŵٰ Ͻø ҰŰƿ.
ϰ ǰ鿡 ؼ Եϰ ⵵ û ؾؿ. װ ̿ ̻ ϴ.. 

3 ƹ͵ 𸣰 ù 迡 7.5 ް ״ ÷ִ ȿڰ̾ 
ҰŶ ߾µ  б 4 2~3 ӵ 3ð  
𸣰ڰ ó а ʹ 󱸿..  ׻Ӹ ƴϰ ̸ 2000~3000ھ Ἥ ϰ,
600 Ѵ ̼ å а 躸ϱ  ̿ 6.5޾Ҵɷ ڶ󱸳 ;ϴ

б ܱ л ̿ 䱸ϴ° ׳ Ű° ƴϿ! 
б ͼ 󰥼 ֳ Ȯϴ° ū ϰ̴ϴ. 
б ƴ ε ? Ͻø鼭  Ƿ øٴ غϼ ھ!! 
ϴ° ǹ̾ ΰ ƴϿ! ޴° ̻ Ǵϱ ھ.

׸ ׽ ϼ̾ ϴ Ͻø ð ڸ ª Ⱓȿ ִ ϼžؿ ! 
9 ϸ鼭 10ȿ ޶ϱ淡 2ķ ϰ п ϰ 15 ѼƮ Ǯ. ķ 9 -11 12Ʈϰ п ǰ纸 ͵ ϸ鼭. ܱⰣ Ͻø 3 ɷ Ǯ 3ָ ǪžѴٴ Ͻø ũ ǽǰŶ մϴ. ħ п 8~9ñ Ƽ ϴٰ 鼭 ʹ ġ⵵ ªⰣȿ ϴ ̻ ׸ŭ ־ϱ ʾҳ .. п ٷ å п ð ư~ Ͻô° ū ȵſ. ̰ ڽҼ־! ´¹ ϸ žؿ! 

Ʋ ٽ Ǯ Ʋ Ǽ Ƽžϰ ÷ Բ Ʋ װ ִ ݺ Ϸ ϰ žϰ ׿ ߷ Ʈ ġø ߷ ϰ ϼž ϰ ŷ ϴ¸ Ҽְ ȥ ߾߾ϸ鼭 ϴ ϼžؿ! 

û Ѱ͵ ƴϰ μ  ߸ߴ͵鸸   ɺ Ǽ ı ַ ð Ȥ ôٸ Ǽ ϼ ڴٴ ̿... ̿.. ҰԿ! ȭ!! 


edm̿ 16-10-26 13:00
 
ٿ հ ߴ. ϰ Ǫ ±
2 ׸  ξ ѵϳ
װ հݼ ߾ ̸ ϴ
лȰ ϰ ǰ лȰ ϸ ~! ߴ ........... ׻
edm̿ 16-10-27 16:46
 
հ ϵ帳ϴ~^^ лȰ ȭԴϴ!!!
 

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